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The Jewel Cave By Keely

The wind was blowing wildly at my face as we entered the chilly Jewel cave. __A slight chill brushed my back like a ghost__ as we marveled the most radiant Jewels in the world. As we entered The sleeper room __I felt a hand settle on my icy shoulder with a tremble I looked behind me and there was no one there__. As we slipped into the room called The Torture Room we looked at __a crystal that looked just like bacon__ and it was the coolest crystal I had ever seen. Our tour guide said that they haven't found the end of the cave yet and I thought how long is this cave. Then our tour guide said that the couple that found the cave found a room that they call The Big Duh and to get to it you have to go in to the __miseries it is 7 inches tall and 6 inches wide__. Then the tour guide turned off the lights in the room called The Crazy room __it was darker than a eclipse on Halloween night. I had a steal tight grip on m dads hand__. Then the tour guide said that there was a black dirt in the cave that if you step on it will never come off. At that point I thought I picked the wrong cave to go in, but at least I didn't step in it. At the end of the tour our tour guide said that where we were in a __cave that had Black bats in it__. By then I started to scream because I don't like bats. I didn't scream, but I was very close. __As fast as a bullet the tour ended__, but I was glad to get out of that bat infested cave. In the future I hope that we can __go in a cave that does not have vampire teethed bats.__